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 ## All Platforms
-- new `tailscale whois` subcommand to observe metadata associated with a Tailscale IP
-- improved responsiveness under load, especially with bidirectional traffic
+- add `tailscale whois` subcommand to observe metadata associated with a Tailscale IP
+- improve responsiveness under load, especially with bidirectional traffic
 - correct choosing amongst multiple interfaces for portmapping
-- `tailscale switch --list` begins including tailnet name and profile ID to disambiguate profiles with common login names
+- include tailnet name and profile ID in `tailscale switch --list` to disambiguate profiles with common login names
 
 ### Linux
-- improved `tailscale web` interface for configuring some device settings such as exit nodes, subnet routers, and Tailscale SSH
-- `containerboot` will symlink its socket file if it can, making the `tailscale` CLI work without `--socket=/tmp/tailscale.sock`
+- improve `tailscale web` interface for configuring some device settings such as exit nodes, subnet routers, and Tailscale SSH
+- improve `containerboot` to symlink its socket file if possible, making the `tailscale` CLI work without `--socket=/tmp/tailscale.sock`
 - support `tailscale update` for Unraid
 
 ### Windows
-- improved throughput for userspace ("netstack") mode in the presence of packet loss
+- improve throughput for userspace ("netstack") mode in the presence of packet loss
 - disable dynamic DNS updates for the tailscale interface via registry setting
-- profile switcher begins displaying tailnet name
-- improved robustness when restarting GUI processes during Windows client upgrades
+- begin displaying tailnet name in profile switcher
+- improve robustness when restarting GUI processes during Windows client upgrades
 
 ### macOS
-- notification is now delivered when a file is received using Taildrop (Mac App Store variant only)
-- added a shortcut action to send files using Taildrop
-- added in-app warnings and push notifications when internet connectivity is blocked because the current exit node is offline or its key has expired
-- stopping Tailscale from the toggle in the menubar item now terminates the VPN tunnel entirely
-- 'About Tailscale' window now informs the user when running a TestFlight build
+- deliver notification when a file is received using Taildrop (Mac App Store variant only)
+- add a shortcut action to send files using Taildrop
+- add in-app warnings and push notifications when internet connectivity is blocked due to the current exit node being offline or having an expired key
+- improve experience stopping Tailscale from the toggle in the menubar; now terminates the VPN tunnel entirely
+- inform user when running a TestFlight build from 'About Tailscale' window
 - fix /etc/resolv file formatting with Tailscaled-on-macOS
-- profile switcher begins displaying tailnet name
+- begin displaying tailnet name in profile switcher
 
 ### iOS
-- added view to show DNS configuration
-- added "Allow Local Network Access" to exit node picker UI
-- added a shortcut action to send files using Taildrop
-- Taildrop notifications now include the received file names
-- added in-app warnings and push notifications when internet connectivity is blocked because the current exit node is offline, or its key has expired
-- 'About Tailscale' view now informs the user when running a TestFlight build 
-- reduced app size by about 2 MB with better assets compression
-- profile switcher begins displaying tailnet name
+- add view to show DNS configuration
+- add "Allow Local Network Access" to exit node picker UI
+- add shortcut action to send files using Taildrop
+- include received file names in Taildrop notifications
+- add in-app warnings and push notifications when internet connectivity is blocked due to the current exit node being offline or having an expired key
+- inform user when running a TestFlight build from 'About Tailscale' window
+- reduce app size by about 2 MB with better assets compression
+- begin displaying tailnet name in profile switcher
 
 ### tvOS
-- added tvOS UI to be a subnet router and configure routes
-- 'About Tailscale' view now informs the user when running a TestFlight build
+- add tvOS UI to be a subnet router and configure routes
+- inform user when running a TestFlight build from 'About Tailscale' window
 
 ### GoKrazy
 - use TUN mode by default
 
 ### Kubernetes
-- API server proxy now supports authenticating a tailnet user group via ACL grants
-- Tailscale Kubernetes operator Helm charts are now published to `pkgs.tailscale.com/helmcharts` and `pkgs.tailscale.com/unstable/helmcharts`
+- support authenticating a tailnet user group using ACL grants from API server proxy
+- publish Tailscale Kubernetes operator Helm charts to `pkgs.tailscale.com/helmcharts` and `pkgs.tailscale.com/unstable/helmcharts`
 - Kubernetes operator cluster egress now supports referring to a tailnet service by its MagicDNS name in the `Service` annotation
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